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Her hair burns, like the
dipping of Apollo's star
beneath snow-crested
mountains, but flows, like rivers
of Poseidon. Free to breathe.
dipping of Apollo's star
beneath snow-crested
mountains, but flows, like rivers
of Poseidon. Free to breathe.
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My second failure at the tanka form of poetry; failures because they don't follow the rule of having a pivotal third line (for them it's the fourth).
I still have to name this and I would have posted it at half past 9, but I had to go watch part of an Indian drama with my mum.
I have no clue why I wrote this, but feel free to guess.
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22:11 I forgot to mention that I once again, had random inspiration for a poem; this poem was inspired by a picture of a red-headed lady on a magazine. I think that's all.
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18/04/2014 14:39 So I finally named it. I quite like the word 'fervent' and especially the double-meaning for the title.
I still have to name this and I would have posted it at half past 9, but I had to go watch part of an Indian drama with my mum.
I have no clue why I wrote this, but feel free to guess.
________
22:11 I forgot to mention that I once again, had random inspiration for a poem; this poem was inspired by a picture of a red-headed lady on a magazine. I think that's all.
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18/04/2014 14:39 So I finally named it. I quite like the word 'fervent' and especially the double-meaning for the title.
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